by
G.A.
"Andy"
Marken
Marken
Communications
Well
developed press
materials can be a
powerful part of a
firm's total
public relations
program. They get
information on the
company's product
developments,
services,
personnel changes,
and financial
reports where they
will do the most
good ... to the
pertinent
publications and
on target e-zines.
Knowing
this, it's
appalling that
news releases, the
most basic form of
external
communication for
any firm, receive
such little care
and attention.
Poor and
incomplete news
releases and
publicity
practices not only
make the issuing
firm look bad,
they insult an
editor's
intelligence.
To
validate the above
statements, we
interviewed more
than 50 business,
financial and
industry
publication
editors. We talked
with an equal
number of on-line
editors. Most of
them said that
they receive an
average of
300+ releases
per day over the
wire, in the mail
and sent
electronically.
More than
three-fourth of
the releases they
receive are so
weak or amateurish
that they go
directly into the
wastebasket
(electronic or
physical).
Gauge
Editorial Needs
How
should publicists
go about providing
information that
will be used?
There is usually a
lot going on in an
organization that
is of interest to
an editor. The
good
"stuff"
isn't delivered to
you on a silver
platter. A good
public relations
person has to be
like a good
reporter and dig
out the
information.
Then
the person who is
writing the
publicity has to
determine what the
information's
worth is to the
company, to the
editor, and to the
reader. If it
doesn't serve all
three, forget it.
Once
you have found
company
information worth
announcing,
determine the
publication(s) you
want to target.
It's quite simple
for anyone who is
doing PR to gauge
the editorial
requirements of a
given publication
or group of
publications. All
he or she has to
do is read a few
issues and study
the editorial
direction/
emphasis. It's
surprising -- even
scary -- how few
people actually
read the
publications that
cover their
industry.
If
publicity writers
are worth their
salt, they will
provide news
releases that have
the style,
content, and
angles to satisfy
the publications'
requirements.
Those are the
releases that get
published.
The
Creative News
Release
Over
the years, we have
seen reams of
releases that pass
right over
editors' desks,
across their
screens and into
the circular file.
For
the most part, the
releases uniformly
lack any spark of
writing
excitement,
comprehension of
news style, or the
solid information
that gets an
editor interested
and maybe even
enthused.
Here
some basic
guidelines our
organization
regularly follows
when preparing
news releases:
-
Write
the release
simply and
factually to
make certain
the full story
is told as
quickly as
possible.
-
When
the story
dictates,
prepare a
strong,
in-depth
backgrounder
that gives the
facts, not
personal
"puff."
This kind of
information
should assist
the editor,
not flatter
your
management.
-
Photographs
should be
real, not with
sharp
contrasts, not
retouched ad
shots. Make
certain that
the cut line
explains the
photo and ties
into the
release. Hand
shaking
events, stiff
suited mug
shots, dull
products on a
non-descript
or very busy
background
seldom find
their way into
print. The
editor is
looking for
information
for his or her
readers, not
self-serving
ego shots.
-
The
release should
contain the
name,
telephone
number and
e-mail address
of the person
who can be
contacted for
additional
information.
In fact, it's
a good
practice to
add the home
telephone
number so that
the editor can
make contact
while the news
is hot in his
or her mind.
-
If
the release
describes a
brochure,
catalog or
data sheet,
include a
copy. It is
good source
material for
future
articles and
it gives the
editor more
information to
work with.
-
Just
as salespeople
tailor their
information to
the interests
of their
prospects,
write the
release with a
specific
publication's
or group of
publications'
readers in
mind.
-
If
the product
has a number
of
applications,
write separate
and
tailored/targeted
releases with
the leads and
body copy
focused to
appeal to each
class of
publications.
Properly done,
the results
can be
dramatic.
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Prior
to forming
Marken
Communications
in mid-1977,
Andy Marken was vice
president of
Bozell &
Jacobs and its
predecessor
agencies.
Marken
Communications
is a
full-service
agency that
concentrates on
business-to-business
market planning,
positioning,
development, and
communications.
For more
information,
visit www.markencom.com
or write Andy@markencom.com
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